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Barbecue pit
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I really like the idea behind this. It is a simple subject, but I find that charred logs and a flame can make an interesting photo. The problem with this photo is that there isn't a real sharp focus anywhere. I am thinking it could be on the logs in the foreground, but that's definitely not carved in stone. I find my eye wandering, trying to find a point to start at (focal point). I think maybe adding a vignette might help a bit too, since charred logs seems like a dark, but warm subject. Keep at it though. :nod: